tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17747558.post1470529896144997956..comments2023-11-05T05:01:39.408-05:00Comments on The Arty Blog: Brontë Sinclair's Island: Chapters III & IVCatreonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15959115298646880631noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17747558.post-88303444223347973022008-09-02T16:10:00.000-04:002008-09-02T16:10:00.000-04:00A devoted fan! Gosh! Puddle, to say you make my da...A devoted fan! Gosh! Puddle, to say you make my day is an understatement.<BR/><BR/>I use the term "story" generically. This particular story is at least a novella. But, here's where things become problematic, a bit rough and more than a bit rough. Chapter 5 has some problems I've not yet been able to smooth out entirely. Chapter 6 stops abruptly in the middle and I have absolutely *no* idear how to get it going again. Chapter 7's OK, but ends with another cliffhanger. And, er, Chapter 7's as far as I've gotten.<BR/><BR/>Any thoughts, suggestions, criticisms, questions... any feedback at all would be *greatly* appreciated. Like I said last night at HEP, I'm marvelous at starting stories. Even middles sometimes. But... Well, if you can tell me what the heck is going on here, I'd be **very** grateful LOLCatreonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15959115298646880631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17747558.post-17219431192299325552008-09-02T13:51:00.000-04:002008-09-02T13:51:00.000-04:00Wow, Cat, Wow!! More please. I think this may no...Wow, Cat, Wow!! More please. <BR/><BR/>I think this may not be a short story though, even a long one. . . .puddlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14472602120015210301noreply@blogger.com